Let's Pretend

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  • Erotic
    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Let's Pretend

    Pretend you and I, are alone someplace,

    holding, each other tight, staring, into space.

    The night is clear; and the moon is bright.

    There's a warm wind blowing, begging us, to unite.


    I'm rubbing your temples, to relax your mind,

    generating chills, up and down, your spine.

    Even though you're moaning, I won't move too fast.

    I have, every intension, of making, this last.


    As I nibble on your neck, your body starts to heat.

    I can feel your toes curling, and the trembling of your feet.

    You're getting impatient; but I want you to know.

    You're just the STAR in this picture, I'M directing, this show.


    Your curiosity is growing; but that's how the "CAT" got killed.

    You want your cup to run over, I'll let you know when to spill.

    I think my teasing is too much, for you to take.

    So I guess it's time, for me to cut this cake.


    As I slice through your icing, I feel you explode.

    This is no game of leap frog, I'm jumping in like a toad.

    I feel your grip loosen; and see your eyes start to shut.

    Goodnight my sweets, see you when, you wake up.

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    jlovett05 commented on Let's Pretend

    11-09-2009

    you really know how to write some awesome poems.. i love reading them

    FLAWLES

    09/03/2010

    I right awesome because I'm inspired by such great poets such as yourself.

    Gracey commented on Let's Pretend

    07-17-2009

    Again this is really good. The flow is brilliant. The words seem to fall on the page perfectly. I am in love with your poetry.

    FLAWLES

    07/17/2009

    I thank you very much for your comments. I'm glad I'm able to keep your attention.

    afresh30 commented on Let's Pretend

    07-14-2009

    I like your flow, tone, each one of your poems brings a smile to my face, I thank you for posting

    FLAWLES

    07/14/2009

    You're very welcome; and I appreciate your comments. Thank you

    Mylyfe commented on Let's Pretend

    06-24-2009

    Love your visuals :-} Enhanced by pure devotion to your skill and craft. Best believe that you are not an act. Live free and love fearlessly.

    FLAWLES

    06/24/2009

    Thank you for your comments. Hmm, fearlessly. I like that; but it's spelled Leslie. :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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