LETTING YOU IN

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    LETTING YOU IN

     I FEEL LIKE BOTH
    JUDAS AND JOAN OF ARCH
    LIKE THE BETRAYER AND THE BETRAYED
    LIKE I'M MOVING TO
    MY EXECUTION AND SALVATION
    ALL AT THE SAME TIME
    COMING TO YOU FOR MY LAST WORDS
    AND THEN MY HANGING
    DID I REALLY COMMIT A SIN?
    WHAT DID I DO SO WRONG?
    WHAT DID I DO?
    BUT LET YOU INTO MY WORLD
    LET YOU BORROW INTO MY TUNNEL?
    WHAT CRAZY THING I DID
    WHEN I LET YOU IN?
    REALLY?
    WASN'T LETTING YOU IN THE BIGGER SIN?

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    shakeme4life commented on LETTING YOU IN

    09-15-2010

    Please come back and grace us with your beautiful poetry....
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    Chaos128 commented on LETTING YOU IN

    06-06-2010

    20 20 hindsight... It's the contradiction that plagues us all. Good work!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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