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  • Sadness

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    I dont care if this is not my best.I found out about how my mom really felt today by reading a letter she sent to my dad about my and my boyfriend of a year.Im not going to change it or fix it because this was a moment thing and i let all my feelings write this.


    I can’t believe you

    I told you everything

    I thought you could see

    But you know nothing about me

    You think me and him are just a for now thing

    When really it’s true

    I can’t believe YOU

    You don’t understand me at all

    You put on a show

    I fell for it you know

    But now I see it was a mistake

    You’re just so fake

    How can I believe what you say?

    If at the end of the day, none of its real

    You don’t say how you really feel

    I’m suppose to be your daughter

    And your suppose to be my mother

    But now all I want is to find another

    One who will listen and not hide

    One who I know would not have lied

    About their faith in me

    Their hope for my future

    with the one I want to be with!!

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    spbsdude commented on Lier


    It is difficult when the one we are to trust the most lies to us. A nice read.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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