Life goes on

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    Life goes on

     A million things run through my mind and I find you ain't gotta be in jail to be doing time.

    A completion of what i need to do in life is a crime.
    To society of course, amazing though how I see people in this world as an evil force.

    Against my own free will I'm forced to see the bad around me and in my family.

    The need to be free is a must in my situation others despising my contemplation, and constantly disagreeing on my figuration hoping that i cant see societies complex transformation.

    A lost soul i must be, no answers i must be alone physically, spiritually, and mentally.

    Despite of what i think, know or feel

    Life Goes On

    Sincerely&Truthfully
    Creation 

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    1BlackPope commented on Life goes on

    09-23-2009

    Very powerful and revealing. Takes balls to write from the heart! Excellent job Creation! But I have to say --- A lost soul I must be ----true we are all somewhat lost souls....no answers I must be alone physically... no way bro you are not alone physically or mentally. Reading this I was right there beside you!
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    teasasue commented on Life goes on

    09-14-2009

    this is interesting, and i really agree with the 1st sentence of this, you dont have to be in jail doing time,. I am not sure it may just be me, but I think this one could use just a little more of something,
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    Rowena commented on Life goes on

    09-12-2009

    This isyour best poem that I've read. It flows like a letter and is lyrical in its context you could easily put a beat to it, very good job. Rowena
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    photochick commented on Life goes on

    09-11-2009

    Intriguing thoughts and outlook I liked how you had it set up to be almost like your writing to yourself making a promise to ones inner self very powerful and creative nice flow just as lynx said watch your spell check its a killer but none the less great write keep up the great writing
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    ChrisP commented on Life goes on

    09-11-2009

    interesting perspective from a poet as young as Creation, You are not reinventing the emotion, but your spin, and talent with words are impressive be on your years, which means nothing really. Your entitled to your words, and they hit the senor's at full speed. You are one to keep an eye on, your talents is mighty
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    Creation

    09/11/2009

    Thank you ChrisP I have been writing since grade school i never thought of it as a talent just a form of my expressed feeling

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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