life is learning

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  • LeeLee420xx
  • I am strong Because I have been Weak I Am Beautiful Because I Know My Flaws,I Am Afraid because I have Been Fearless, I Can be a Fool because I Know The Meaning Of Being Wise. I am me and I am awsome!

life is learning

I've always been so indecisive about the choices that I face.
I'm always thinking about what might have been, even though it's way too late.
I hear you laughing down the hall way in the corner of my mind.
I can't see through the darkness,oh but I, hear you just fine.
You laugh because you think you've got me, under your thumb, rapped up in you.
But I've got something,something to tell you, I don't think that you knew.
I'm leaving, this evening and I won't be back again.
And I don't like you so don't ask me.
No, we can not be friends.
Cause I have found someone who loves me, for who and what i am.
And I don't think you can compare,cause he is a man.

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Kanicki commented on life is learning

12-08-2010

I love this write - lay it on the line and take control! I especially like the ending...LOL...that was great.

Musicmynded1 commented on life is learning

08-30-2010

Very nice flowing song... i can definitely feel it moving as a song should.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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