life sucks

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    life sucks

    life sucks
    it always has 2
    life sucks
    i guess thats the truth
    life sucks
    it always has 2

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on life sucks

    09-26-2009

    yes i does lol :)............................................

    Angel197038 commented on life sucks

    07-05-2009

    You obviously seem to be having a hard time and I hope and pray that this gets better for you. I admire your honesty in your work.....I would only suggest that you put more emphasis on why this is that you feel this way so that people understand where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing your work! God Bless, Helen

    HopeOhlarik commented on life sucks

    05-19-2009

    i have read a couple of your poems and it seems like your the type that loves to repeat things. that isn't bad when writting poems but you have to spread it out a little more. poems have to have a body or they are just words put in places. try and give it a body. and life does suck while we're young, but it will get better, it always does!

    mnowlin11 commented on life sucks

    05-16-2009

    life gets better as u become an adult

    DeepBlueSeas commented on life sucks

    05-08-2009

    some poems are meant to be short especialy when they convey their meaning so clearly. i would suggest not using a number unless it is a numeric value you are trying to convey

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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