Life

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    • travisd76
    • Been on a hiatus for awhile, but I'm back and have the itch to write some poetry.

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    Thought I would try a little haiku

    Life

    life is not unfair
    it is what you make of it
    not what it makes you

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    jademelissa74 commented on Life

    06-28-2009

    Indeed, life isn't unfair! Truth and Reflection at their best. I love the way you managed to use simple phrases to create this amazing piece. Great Job!

    travisd76

    06/28/2009

    Thanks. My Grandma said how much she likes Haiku, so I thought I would give one a try.

    tenderpoison commented on Life

    06-27-2009

    nicely done. and a real truth of life. it's good to see you spread your poetic wings and fly.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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