life

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  • Confusion
    • freind
    • sitting here reading all you nice peoples poems.

    life

    what is life for?
    what are we put here for?
    to love our family and freinds.
    one thing i know for sure.
    is that i belive you.
    have to love your self.
    in order to love someone else.
    with the hatred.
    with the killings.
    with the war.
    what is all that for?
    there surely is no love there.
    it tells me know one cares.
    so i look deep inside.
    looking for a place to hide.
    i know if and when i get there.
    maybe i will find someone who really cares.
    so share the love you got in your heart.
    trust me it wont hurt.
    the feeling you get.
    so learn to love the people.
    thats in your life.
    maybe if you do.
    then we can make the world a better place in life:?

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    dahlusion commented on life

    07-06-2009

    Life is love and all of the ups and downs that come with love. This is a good piece in its search for life, love, and meaning. But, really, does life have to mean anything?

    freind

    07/06/2009

    first i have to say thanky you for your comment it is a honor to get a reply from one of the masters. i wounder if life has a true meaning myself.i guess you take what you are dealt with we all have our problems we got to figure out to really see if it does have any meanings

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    freind’s Poems (22)

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    finest hour 4
    somebody 3
    Time 2
    darkness 1
    for the children 3
    liar 8
    life 1
    addiciton 4
    love 4
    brother 3
    poetry 1
    calm 0
    thoughts 1
    momma 7
    spirit of freedom 1
    days past 1
    missing 3
    angel 4
    son 1
    woman 3
    beloved 3
    feelings 4