Life

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Sorry, I ruined my dark streak with this one.

Life

Into your heart, I try to look

I hope to find that love

something there, like a book

something from above

 

Into your soul, I see your life

something not so great

you've tried to end it, with a knife

you're so filled with hate

 

I see in you, a trace of love

something you can't see

give your heart, to the spirits above

and you're soul shall be set free

 

I see in you, there's something there

something you embrace

You try you're best, to never care

But I see it in your face

 

You are lost, looking for love

but none is to be found

you fly, higher than a dove

and you look onto the ground

 

Look in front, and you shall find

that one thing you really need

that love, that joy, that peace of mind

and with that, I say Godspeed

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lunamarie commented on Life

10-03-2009

Dear Venom, This poem is hearfelt and sweet ... I appreciate the rhyming ... sweet and nice ... Luna

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Venom637’s Poems (35)

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Title Comments
Curse from God 0
Tainted 2
Gothic Christmas 1
Shattered Souls 1
Blank 2
I am darkness 0
I could only try 1
Broken 2
Cloak 0
This is it 3
My prayer 4
Escape 2
Alone 2
Tainted 2
Succubus 0
Reflection 3
Twisted 1
Stripped Away 3
Dead Man's dance 3
Darkness Rang 1
One Thorn 2
Life 1
Insane 0
FairyTale 0
Lost 1
Mislead 0
Dead 1
Dead once more 2
The roses were red 2
For the life we live 0
The Last Rose 2
Against my will 2
The Color Red 3
Sea of Lies 5
Ten Black Roses 9