Life....

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    Life....

    Life is to precious
    to precious to me
    to sit here and wait
    to wait impatiently
    Just to have faith
    faith that is real
    to go out and touch
    to know I can feel
    To open my heart
    to dreams that I crave
    to not be afraid
    of what can be saved
    My life is waiting
    just within my reach
    To be lived and to learn
    and to be opened to teach
    With love and joy
    the root of all things
    with so much to give
    is nothing but dreams
    My life is full
    the fullest of these
    Is knowing someone cares
    more then all of these

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    kittman101 commented on Life....

    07-11-2009

    i like your poem more then words can say, more then expressions can show. thanks for showing me :)

    cmlestrade commented on Life....

    07-08-2009

    I originally read your poem because I spent a lot of time on Elkins ave in Killeen. Glad I did because I loved it. The Rhymes, the meter and most of all the meaning. This was a very nice work

    mykhail commented on Life....

    02-12-2009

    Very good! There was no punctuation ... so I figured you meant for it to be this way! Life is to precious ... keep it up!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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