• Meldarth

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Play on words; interesting amount of reflection due to a more than a few drinks is what I came up with here :) Let me know what you think


We live;
we love;
we loose;

our hearts get broken;
each of us are experts in psychology as everyone around us is crazy;
yet each day we strive to do something;

we move forward;

we stand still;
each day is an adventure;

yet boring;
 because each day;

is what we make it;

and what we make each day ends up defining our lives;

enjoy or not;
live or live not.....

Clinton Trapp '13

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windsongs commented on Life


maybe ill have one :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Meldarth’s Poems (29)

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Patience and Duck Tape. 0
The Cage and Madness of Darkness 0
Darkness Rises 0
Some day 1
Fate 0
A New Day part II 0
A new day 0
Illusion of Alone 2
Echoes of Future Past 0
Wise words; or a foolish dream 4
A talk with Life 0
Dreams of Life 0
Life 1
Atlas holding my World 1
Voyage of Dreams 0
Capturing of a moment. 1
Here we go 1
Blink of Time 2
Feeling of Tears 2
The Pain of Truth 17
A Summer's Day 33
World of a 2 year old 8
Dream a little Dream 5
Light of Hope 1
Hollow Nights 2
Childhood 1
The Phoenix 1
The Night 1
Fields of Gold 1