Life's Lessons

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this is about a child in an abusive, loveless and fatherless home and the mother is either expecting or has a new child.

Life's Lessons

A tearful child,

from another broken home,

I can forget my

past, but only some:

The vicious fights

and argument matches;

the holey roof

without any patches;

the drinking and

the bottle smashing;

destruction always

crashing, crashing.

The constant stream

of men: in and out.

How to survive

when I can not shout?

When all I can do

is sit silently?

When all I say must

be said politely?

These pasts I can

not forget,

But I can

make a bet…

I bet there

will be another one,

just like me.

No love, much pain, no fun.

I point it out to her:

who’s quick to fight,

quick to anger, but

slow to make it right.

Not much later,

another is there,

and all I can do is smile,

and teach him: to grin and bear.

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cmlestrade commented on Life's Lessons

09-09-2009

This is a marvelous statement on how it really is for some children. it's an emotional piece that highlights the neglect and abuse a mother may unsuspectingly not realize what her personal choices are doing to her children.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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PandoraBox’s Poems (25)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Progression of Life 4
Never Forget 0
Muse 0
Betrayed 0
Dad 1
The Day I Lost You 1
Everytime 1
Falling 0
n/a 0
Life's Lessons 1
Light 0
My Emo Poem 0
Over It 0
Perceptions 0
Silence 0
Sleep & Wake 0
I Lost You 0
Darkness 0
n/a 0
Victory 0
Breath 0
Lost to Yourself 0
Anxiety 0
Isolation 0
Waiting 0