Like the Dying of Stars

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    Like the Dying of Stars

    Surrounded in darkness, on your radiance I must feed, 

    passions burst I splinter, into dazzling shards of need,

    burned by everything you touch; heart, mind, and soul,

    an undeniable force, near you my resolve will not hold.

     

    In your embrace I long to blaze in your scorching depth,

    to be seared by your regard, you cremate my flesh, 

    until I am but ash, blown on the winds of your breath.

     

    Like a dying star you explode across my darkest skies,

    your brilliance erases everything before my eyes,

    a vision of unconditional love I see you refined,

    I stare longingly into your light, without fear of going blind

     

    Your exposed heart, a beauty beyond what I could ever imagine, 

    You have been concentrated into a core of inescapable attraction,

    becoming the very axis on which my universe will forever spin.

     

    With you I have learned how to live and love again,

    for too brief a time you will  outshine even heaven,

    and as you dwindle into an unseen faint point of light,

    I will feel your influence, pulling me in tight.    

    Bryan David Lang

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    MJG956 commented on Like the Dying of Stars

    06-05-2010

    Nice erotic write with a twist of the outer unlimited space travels that avail Us naught. I can tell that You are somewhat a fan of Superman,as well I am. Nothing wrong in Science Fiction, I say. Nice poem! I see no Kryptonitic rays of badness eminating from this write,only good talents dripping through.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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