Lilacs From Heaven

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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With this poem I tried to make the poem in the shape of a cluster of Lilac blossoms.......well I think I got pretty close anyway.........lol.......hope you all enjoy this one........love asha

Lilacs From Heaven

Lilacs From Heaven

Let me hear you say, I love you
as you, wipe the tears that I've shed
Watching your Lilacs grow & blossom
That you sent me from Heaven

Please call out my name, love?
And chase the nightmares away
Embracing you in my dreams
Vases on my nightstand, filled
With your Lilacs from Heaven

I will try and be strong, for you
As the darkness peeks through
my window and haunts my dreams
Please call out my name, so I can dream
only of your love, with that sweet aroma
Of those Lilacs from Heaven

Cherished forever, are my dreams of you, and
I know I must carry on, even in the pouring
rain, on a sunshiny day. I know the rain, is
Your tears from Heaven, you sent to me
To give this earth new life, each day, and
to water those heavenly bushes, while
Holding your Lilacs from Heaven

Written by
Asha
2010©

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Rhymer commented on Lilacs From Heaven

08-31-2010

Do not know much about lilacs but the picture is only shadowed in beauty by this poem. Excellent read. 10

ApaqRasgirl

08/31/2010

thank you dear, I am glad you liked it. this one was paired up with one of Sir Stryx poems on the page 2poemsforu created by two other poets on here. Stryx poems is called 'One of my most favorite things".........you can read both together at:http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/2poemsforu then you will see the similarity in the two as to why they were paired up for this new thing going...............lol.........loves ya asha

Olan01 commented on Lilacs From Heaven

08-31-2010

The lilacs reminds me or the lilac bush that grew in front yard as a child. The poem reminds me of my late mother and the tear I shed when she pasted too early. I thank you for sharing your thoughts. Olan

ApaqRasgirl

08/31/2010

thank you my dear poet friend for those sweet words, I am thrilled my humble words were able to touch you so, thanks for you have made my heart soar...........loves ya asha

ginga commented on Lilacs From Heaven

08-27-2010

Asha, I loved this one and it reminds me of one Stryx has posted about the rain. Now that;s an idea for a 2poemsforu. You may want to check it out. Anyway well done. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

cool thank you dear, I will, do you know what the name of his poem is........thanks for the heartfelt comment ginga, I do so appreciate and look forward to your comments on my poems......thanks.....love asha..........I will talk to Sir Stryx about it and see if he wants to do it with me...........poems that is.........LMAO at my own words...........grins

ginga

08/27/2010

The name of it is "One of My Most Favorite Things" it does not speak of lilacs but love and rain ginga

knight4696 commented on Lilacs From Heaven

08-27-2010

Very Beautiful Asha .. A lilac bunch is definitely not the easiest to draw to begin with .. never mind trying to form the shape out of words. But you certainly were able to do so. Great Job my friend! :) Ken

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

thank you ken, for the sweet comment, that actually just came out that way by accident, when I finished writing it and saw the shape I amazed myself.......thanks for reading and commenting, I am happy that you liked it.......loves ya asha

MindNumbing commented on Lilacs From Heaven

08-27-2010

This is simply spectacular, Asha. The layout is beautiful... If I understand correctly from the last comment, you must have had some rogue punctuation thrown about in an effort to shape the poem they way you wanted... I didn't see the original layout, but this layout is wonderful, and it accomplished exactly what you were going for without the use of unnecessary periods :) Beautifully written in your signature, heart-filled style. Excellent job!

ApaqRasgirl

08/27/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, yes I had put three periods at the end of each line just for looks and it did cause the reader to stumble with the lines so I took them out.........I do that sometimes on my poems just for looks........I duno would you call that a girl thing, wanting to decorate............LMAO..........thanks I am thrilled you liked it.........loves ya asha

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