Limited

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    Limited

     I dont know what about you makes me smile

    I dont know why I wait for you everyday
    in denial
    that Im falling for you
    And I bet you can tell by the look in my eyes  that I cant stand being with or without you

    I'm crying out in every move that I make
    that I want you to hold me and say that you
    love me........
    for everyday we spend together is limited
    In this gated perimeter

    Well basically what I'm trying to say...........


    I love you in every single small way

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    Chaos128 commented on Limited

    07-15-2009

    You're words are very moving. I'm thinking you chose the small type to emulate talking in a small/shy voice. Only you know what works best for you, but if you love someone, it seems a shame not to let them know.
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