Liquid Fire

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  • Fantasy
    • nini2323
    • I once knew everything, and now I know nothing.

    Liquid Fire

    The carnival city beside the toxic ocean
    Where only the cold hearted survive
    They build brightly painted stages
    Filled with the dreams of those who have forgotten.

    Forgotten how to love without guarding their hearts
    Forgotten the way true warmth feels.

    Candies fill their souls devouring the emptiness of broken hearts

    They are no longer alone
    Surrounded
    By lights and music and other almost dead opium eyed
    Inhabitants of an old city
    That eats the youth from their faces

    Elixirs made from chemicals made to kill
    Free them
    Leaving reality spirals down lost in a world of magic.

    No longer sick, old, lonely, scarred, needing, wanting
    Feeling only the ups and downs of chemical romance.

    I run to the sea, falling into the icy glass
    Even here the chemicals burn me
    There is no where real left
    I fall to my knees, choking sputtering coughing
    Liquid fire in my throat.

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    SuSpence commented on Liquid Fire

    04-27-2010

    This is an awesome piece of work nini. I loved your use of metaphors, imagery, and raw emotion in this one. The title drew me in and I was hooked right up until the end where I wanted more, so I read it again, and again, and......again haha, Great write!

    Rygar commented on Liquid Fire

    10-06-2009

    sounds like a rave i went to. :) seriously kick ass. you rock, a poet...yeah baby!

    BraveMoon commented on Liquid Fire

    08-11-2009

    . excellent painting, terrifyingly accurate

    MissIvy commented on Liquid Fire

    05-09-2009

    Love this

    WordSlinger commented on Liquid Fire

    04-01-2009

    Intense 9

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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