Little Girl

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I wrote this poem when I was 15, about a friend of mine.  Luckily her situation didn't end up this severe.  But it could have.  Addiction is a powerful sickness.  Pray for all those whose suffer from it...

Little Girl

She kissed her mama bye

As she set out for the world.

She said, "No matter what,

I'll always be your little girl."

She moved out far away

To a place that no one knew.

Pretty soon, times got rough

And she didn't know what to do.

She started going downhill

Way too hard & fast.

Little girl, you'd better straighten up

Or you're gonna finish last.

It started out real simple

But got worse everyday.

She thought the drugs would stop the pain

But it didn't go away.

She said it was under control.

She told everyone she's fine.

Yet she's selling her body on the street

Just to get high one more time.

It turned into a habit.

A constant, craving need.

She'd do anything you offered

For crack, heroin, or speed.

She must have lost her mind that night.

She must have got too high.

Little girl, it's gone too far.

You made your mama cry.

The cop said, "One more overdose,"

In the alley where she was found.

And everyone was silent

When they put her in the ground.

A tear rolled down her mama's cheek

As she fell down to her knees.

"Why can't my baby still be alive?

Would someone tell me, please?"

Every night she kneels to pray

With her broken heart, in an unfair world

And it still hurts everytime she says,

"God take care of my little girl."

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Insideme commented on Little Girl

06-23-2010

This is something ive witnessed firsthand with a few friends from school. It is a sad thing to see a woman go through. great write.

ansari commented on Little Girl

06-08-2010

It touches the soul. sad to say a common happening right around us. we can see young lives blasted by the hatred drugs. I understand the feeling. a good poem. a 10 from me. glad it didn't happen all the way.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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