LIVER

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    LIVER

    I am talking from inside this body
    Inside this body is wear I lay
    Working as hard as I can day and night
    I am strong; I need to for I have a major job to do
    Are you hearing what I am saying?
    I don’t think so for I can’t talk
    All I do night and day and day and night
    Is lay in this body, deep into my work
    Yes a human can touch me
    I can touch a human, which is what I do
    I can die but I choose to live
    I choose to save people lives
    Please take me, take 80 % of me
    For I only need 20% to stay alive
    Please try to hear me, as I talk to you
    Can you hear me? Can you feel me?
    If so I have a wish for you
    As I lay here inside your body
    As I keep a life going day after day
    Night after night with the job I do
    All I request is one thing from my host
    Will you save another life?
    Or will you choose to sit back and watch people die
    For if I could talk and reach out to you
    This is what I would have to say to you
    I want to be heard, I want to live
    I do not want to kill
    So please hear me now as I try to speck to you
    Will you save another life, as I keep you alive?
    If I could talk and reach you this is what I would have to say
    Coming from you Liver, can you hear me? Can you feel me?
    Don’t watch people die, take a change and save a life
    This is your Liver talking, a major organ to keep you alive
    Now all I like to say to you, as you sit here and hear my words
    And thank you from the bottom of your stomach
    For letting me reach out to you, sitting there trying to hear my words

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    Crush commented on LIVER

    06-11-2009

    This is a crazy poem !!! Crazy and wonderful and odd and thoughtful and provacative and out there and an enjoyable read. thanks.

    mbph2001 commented on LIVER

    04-10-2009

    I understand what you are trying to say about what a Liver can do. But! Honestly I think you need to attend some sort of remedial school to help yourself along. You suck when it comes to writing poems.

    kaleo55 commented on LIVER

    03-15-2009

    Liver - a powerful message of mastering healing, good health from the body to the mind, hopefully a message entered by the spirit...

    CopperTop327 commented on LIVER

    03-15-2009

    this one is very good. i like it alot...i have mixed emotions on the subject though...personal i guess

    TheCreativepoet commented on LIVER

    03-15-2009

    This poem is very good.It makes you think about your body and what you do to it at certain times.Very creative and good work Ashley.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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