Living In The Past

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  • iLuvPoetryJACOB
  • Poetry will always emerge out of the shadows of depression, shining like a star in the scarcity of light.

Living In The Past

These words glint in the morning sunlight,

Catching the sun’s eye.

I cannot see, nor can I hear,

The world seems quite transparent.

The train had passed,

Leaving not a trace

For me to try and follow.

The door still stands wide open,

Inviting me, beckoning me,

 But as I walk through,

Another endless corridor stretches before my eyes.

 

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ginga commented on Living In The Past

01-03-2010

JACOB. I like the randomness of this poem for sure . It has interesting twists and turns leading the reader through a labyrinth of scenes. ginga

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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