Locked up

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This is based on the way i feel. This is strange but perhaps we all have a inner beast aching and begging to come out.

Locked up

Eyes to dark an much to animal like
A smile that is dark laced with malice
Yet it still is animal like.
Taunts aimed to me
Ingoring them I walk on
The days going by slowly
The nights slower
The whimpers and growls
That escape closed lips
That bleed freely
From being bitten
The the way I lower my head
staring longingly out the window
A low growl coming through bared teeth
Insanity of the moon
A never ending craving
To run free in the night
Yet always locked up
Like a caged animal

Find The keys to my cage
The bars can only handle so much force
My inner animal begging to be free
I can feel the goddess around me
Calming that animal
Whispering sweet things to it
Calming and loving
Soothing the inner beast
Locked up
For that all I am
A caged wild beast

Longing for the freedom
Yet kept to be watced
The push me farther
They darken my heart more
Locking that also in the shadows
The animal now aching to be free
A howl of pain escaping my lips
Locked up

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ShadowStealer commented on Locked up

11-17-2010

Woooow I absolutely looove this one. The third poem I've read of yours and the third one that's going into my favorites!!! ShadowStealer

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