Muy Loco

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    Muy Loco

    You know that I am zany
    Everyone thinks of me as strange
    Don’t take me to the doctor
    I will never ever change

    I am mad. I am loony
    You can say sick in the head
    Dust bunnies for my pillow
    Tried to sleep beneath my bed

    Wake up in the evening
    Walk naked in the snow
    Don’t know where I am going
    Mexicans call me muy loco

    A stretch of the imagination
    A walk around the block
    Hands are stuck on twelve
    A Swiss made cuckoo clock.

    My mind’s a tad demented
    They think of me disturbed
    The idea I’ve concocted
    Leaves you a bit perturbed

    Peering through my window
    You see the lights are on
    Searching all around here
    You find that I have gone

    Went to another time and place
    Venus, Saturn, or even Mars
    My journey is not bound
    By things they call the stars

    Don’t worry I’ll be back
    When I find a not asked question
    Until then I must say
    I’ll have to keep you guessin'

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    poett commented on Muy Loco

    06-03-2013

    My grandpa's saying was that there's a little crazy in all of us. The only people who don't have it are the real crazy ones. Lol... it is a very entertaining fun piece. I like it.
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    MootPoint

    06/03/2013

    You have made my day with all of your comments. :) Thanks

    Hiporlacking commented on Muy Loco

    12-10-2010

    This made me laugh. After careful analysis I'm come to the conclusion that you're not crazy...just creative. Nice write. The Mexican's call me Muy Loco...lol.
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    MootPoint

    12/10/2010

    Why can't I be both? hooohooooheeeheee

    kmooney commented on Muy Loco

    09-25-2010

    I liked this one. Nice play on words. I especially like the "Swiss made cuckoo clock" line. Very creative and imaginative. Quite a crazy little poem, if you ask me. Thanks for sharing...Kevin.
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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Muy Loco

    06-04-2010

    This poem showcases your ability to go against the grain. It's entertaining and unique. Great write.
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    cheronld commented on Muy Loco

    05-26-2010

    I am also a visitor and sometimes resident of State Loco....its a wonderful place to visit....lol....I really enjoyed this and found myself smiling as I read.....mi esta loco
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