Lilly, fairy

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I have written first this poem in French and tried to translate it in English. The name of Eve sounds well in French, but not in English. And the translations was not good. Then I have modified the name of Lilly and I have tried now to built the English version not as a translation, but in the same shape, the same imagination, but with other words... In my opinion, they sound like a little song. - New version where I have canceled the french version..

Lilly, fairy


Lilly, beautiful as a lily

Love Lilly, well-made lady

 

Celebrate Lilly, really sexy

So sweet, smart and funny

 

Lively, lily, fairy, sweety Lilly

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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