Loneliness

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    Loneliness

    SEPERATED FROM ALL OF YOU  THE ONES I WANT TO BE WITH

    ISOLATED AS IF YOU KNEW SOME REASON THAT I SHOULD BE DISHED

    LOST IN PITY WADDLING IN PAIN

    SUFFERING BECAUSE I WANT TO BE WITH YOU AGAIN

    SEARCHING ENDLESSLY THROUGH MY HEART AND MIND

    I CANT BE RIGHT ALL OF THE TIME

    TRUSTING NOONE NOT LISTENING TO A WORD

    I LOST YOUR LOVE FOR BECAUSE OF WHAT YOU HEARD

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    SwanSong commented on Loneliness

    11-07-2009

    Ohhhhhh...How Sad..... Too many times this happens, & in the end, a "whisperer" separates us from close friends & loved ones. Thank you for this poem.

    VenusianWoman commented on Loneliness

    11-02-2009

    Sadness along with loneliness. I feel and understand your pain.

    lonelynotalone commented on Loneliness

    10-17-2009

    You sound like a genuine person. You have a beautiful daugter. I hope things work themselves out. We just have to leave things up to God sometimes. I have felt your pain through your words. This poem was hurtful, bit it had good flow.

    Savant commented on Loneliness

    10-16-2009

    He say She say. I used to hide behind that cliche'. The truth usually was what they heard and I wasn't ready to deal with the truth back then. Didn't seem like the truth was as much fun as what I was doing. :)

    YungPoetiic commented on Loneliness

    10-15-2009

    u musta been feelin alot of pain i like it its short but it explains how you was feelin at the time well put together

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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