Loneliness...at this Rate

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Loneliness...at this Rate

Dont leave me,
here in the dark,
alone by myself,
please, listen to my bark.

My heart is breaking,
as you walk away,
I want to stop you,
but what can I say?

As your feet keep moving,
the light darkens,
shadows arise,
my cries, you harken.

When you are gone,
from my sight,
I try to breathe,
and hold myself tight.

Now my world,
is dark and grey,
my soul is dead,
and begins to decay.

You were my only,
you were my all,
but how could you stand,
to watch me fall?

You were my crutch,
you were my cane,
without your support,
I fall like rain.

Depression comes,
with the tears I cry,
I want to be alone,
until the day I die.

Here I lay,
loneliness, my fate,
It must be true,
at this rate.

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1990lh commented on Loneliness...at this Rate

09-15-2009

wow very nice i love it the flow was awesome. and i could feel your pain as i read your words. you also painted a vivid picture in my head so great job

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

edgarApoe10’s Poems (53)

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Heart Shaped Box 3
Worried 3
Life Will Come Again 0
"Hi" 2
Can't Tear Us Apart 1
I Don't Know What I Was Thinking 0
Heart Can't Trust 1
Saved from Loneliness 1
Without a Frown 1
Love Unknown 1
Missing You 2
Oh Little Raven 2
Closing the Door 5
Missing Younger Years 2
I Hate You 0
Sadie Hawkins 1
Remember, You Promised... 1
Surprise Me, Please 0
Only Wishing 1
Seventeen Years of Waiting 0
Yearning for You 0
Eyes 1
Thousand Times I've Cried 2
The Worst Kind of Killer 1
Tears I Weep 0
Will You Be My Neighbor? 1
Late Night's Passion 0
Stay 0
My Inner Rage 0
Together Forever 0
Somehow I'll Win 1
I Am Alone 0
So Long, So Close, Together Again 0
Loneliness...
at this Rate
1
Going Insane 4
My Dear Silent Friend 2
My Cage 0
Murderers of Love 6
Future Without You 1
My Anti-Depressa
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0
My Prince Charming 0
Stay With You 2
Gossip 1
Quiting the Battle of Other's Concern 0
Lonely High-School 1
Pains For You 0
Senior Year 1
Writers Block 0
Keep Praying 0
I Am Here 0
Your Tumor 0
Words Spoken 1
A Breath of Faith 1