Lonely as the Wind

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    Some times I feel like life is passing far too quickly......alone

    Lonely as the Wind

     

     

    I lie here in the dark, 

    wind blowing softly across my skin

    somewhere in the trees

    sounds the whisper of a lark

     

    Melancholy is my mood

    alone in the night

    longing for the gentle touch

    to make everything alright

     

    Empty place beside me

    pillow plump and white

    missing someone special

    to cling to in the night

     

    Lonely winds blowing

    curtains billow in the breeze

    Dreams are only fleeting

    in twilight they do tease

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    Sx9 commented on Lonely as the Wind

    07-27-2010

    vibes up sis,can feel the vibes in my soul ur almost there and the going is great,,walk good,,strong vibes,,
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    purpleswan

    07/28/2010

    Thank you Sx9....your comments are appreciated.............Swan

    dahlusion commented on Lonely as the Wind

    06-04-2010

    "Empty place beside me pillow plump and white missing someone special to cling to in the night"—this is the perfect expression of loneliness with all of its poetic power. Bravo!
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    purpleswan

    06/04/2010

    Thank you dah....it is truely lonliness I feel.

    gogant commented on Lonely as the Wind

    06-03-2010

    The loneliness one feels can be enhanced by the light touch of a breeze.............you have, with this, a drawing of a scene of being alone....................A lovely poem....................................gogant
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    purpleswan

    06/03/2010

    Thank you for your elegant comment, gogant. You felt just what I wanted to express.

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