Lonely as the Wind

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Some times I feel like life is passing far too quickly......alone

Lonely as the Wind

 

 

I lie here in the dark, 

wind blowing softly across my skin

somewhere in the trees

sounds the whisper of a lark

 

Melancholy is my mood

alone in the night

longing for the gentle touch

to make everything alright

 

Empty place beside me

pillow plump and white

missing someone special

to cling to in the night

 

Lonely winds blowing

curtains billow in the breeze

Dreams are only fleeting

in twilight they do tease

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Sx9 commented on Lonely as the Wind

07-27-2010

vibes up sis,can feel the vibes in my soul ur almost there and the going is great,,walk good,,strong vibes,,

purpleswan

07/28/2010

Thank you Sx9....your comments are appreciated.............Swan

dahlusion commented on Lonely as the Wind

06-04-2010

"Empty place beside me pillow plump and white missing someone special to cling to in the night"—this is the perfect expression of loneliness with all of its poetic power. Bravo!

purpleswan

06/04/2010

Thank you dah....it is truely lonliness I feel.

gogant commented on Lonely as the Wind

06-03-2010

The loneliness one feels can be enhanced by the light touch of a breeze.............you have, with this, a drawing of a scene of being alone....................A lovely poem....................................gogant

purpleswan

06/03/2010

Thank you for your elegant comment, gogant. You felt just what I wanted to express.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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