Lonely Tear

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Lonely Tear

Why can't I see what is right in front of me. My thoughts speed by, all a blur.
Lost in thought don't know what I'm thinking.
Shattered dreams, hopeless endings. All this work, I still have no idea which direction is right. No ways to turn and no light at the end. My legs are moving as fast as I can, my body yet to move an inch.
I'm screaming inside so no one can hear,a smile on my face and a lonely tear...

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JustMe69 commented on Lonely Tear

02-28-2010

nice write I'll read more!.......... JustMe

lithiumblack commented on Lonely Tear

02-26-2010

Excellent description. Life's burdens pile on, and there rarely seems to be any light at the end of the tunnel. You can almost feel the hopelessness oozing from this one.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

ThatGurl’s Poems (27)

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Tunnel Wind 0
Tunnel Wind 0
Tidal wave 0
Suffocating 1
Seperate me 2
Mirror 1
Inhale... 1
Goodnight 3
Are you kidding me??? 0
Changes 0
Searching 2
Who am I??? 1
Sleep 2
Blackflag 1
Silence that grows 5
Smile 3
So genuine, So innocent, So pure 2
Screaming 1
Unborn Child 0
I Gave You 2
Stare into the Shadows 2
All those unskopen words 1
I've missed it... 0
Dark Days 1
Lonely Tear 3
I Dream... 2
Catching my breathe 1