'long walks to nowhere'

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    'long walks to nowhere'

    i've been here before,
    in fact i never left;
    i;ve seen the greener side
    and over the wall i lept;
    i've walked a mile barefooted and
    scorched my inner core ;
    i've cried a river so long and
    cold ,i never could indure;
    i've chanced high stakes and
    tried to sale my soul;
    i've given up and walked
    away ,the devil paid my toll;
    i've died and went to heaven
    if only in my dreams;
    i've woke up in hell ,
    and...imagine a life somewhere in between;

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    redbloodink commented on 'long walks to nowhere'

    12-03-2009

    DEEP.....emotional and thought provoking...... thanx Red

    jadienblu

    12/03/2009

    its okay not my best ...actually a doodle but thank you much...

    brandon commented on 'long walks to nowhere'

    05-17-2009

    inspiring

    bforibus commented on 'long walks to nowhere'

    01-25-2009

    wow i love the image and the story that was told here. u painted a picture here and i loved looking at it

    allenjermy commented on 'long walks to nowhere'

    12-22-2008

    wow i like your style. You are very good. Keep it up...Don Folks

    1LostGypsy commented on 'long walks to nowhere'

    12-21-2008

    Love it! I'm making it one of my favorites!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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