longing to be with you

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    longing to be with you

    oh how i long to be with you
    i can t wait until the time is right
    when when can be together
    in the open insted of hiding in the night
    you are so perfect for me
    but i wonder if you feel the same
    for my love for you is so wild
    but your seems to be tame
    i cannot wait to be with you
    so i can hold you in my arms
    and every time i see you
    i fall in love with those silly charem
    i have been longing for this day
    when our fighting would finally be done
    so that we may be united
    and placed together as one
    oh how i long to be with you
    i can t wait until the time is right
    when when can be together
    in the open insted of hiding in the night

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    Jita commented on longing to be with you

    06-03-2009

    I feel you on this one sista.......its' good I like it kdjfjsjlfjdksjfskjfieowefjskdfjsdkfjlkjjkljdk that's my 100 characters lol

    Indigogreen16 commented on longing to be with you

    06-02-2009

    love it. very nice, i like this..........................................................................

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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