look at my body

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    a life full of attention

    look at my body

    look at my body
    the thing which was given by my mom and daddy
    this was a mass in the womb
    and
    lik a glass out of the womb
    it is fragile and in young age it is agile.

    When you are young you admire it
    when you are child everyone admires it
    but when
    in after the dath everyone forgets it
    because it is only body
    a body
    which again is the mass in the tomb.

    Blessed are the ones who use the body
    for the good
    blessed are the ones who use the body
    well understood about its purpose
    that god created
    yes
    it was created to spread love
    to spread affection
    and to help others when they are in dire need
    until the death it bleeds to do good thing.

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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    giri’s Poems (30)

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    my saute to every sister 1
    A DAY WITHOUT YOU 2
    cheat 2
    autism a boon or bane 6
    look at my body 0
    nothing in our hands 1
    touch my heart 3
    work is worship 1
    love to live and live to love. 1
    god is my lord. 0
    love regained. 0
    marriage 1
    think 0
    where am i 0
    surprise 0
    my dear son 0
    touch your heart. 1
    am I old.? 0
    immortal 2
    life is to excel. 1
    eclipse 1
    fantasy 0
    winner 1
    am i a poet. 1
    truth -wife. 0
    evergreen life. 4
    sexy 1
    mothers love. 1
    emotional 1
    my friends 1