Look in my eyes

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  • Sadness

    Look in my eyes

    I wonder what would happen,
    If we all just got along,
    If maybe one day we all didnt make our life into a sad song,

    One day we'll have whats better,
    Some day we'll be together,
    Don't give up,
    Its not the end,
    Look in my eyes,
    And know i'll always be your friend

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    Tempestlady commented on Look in my eyes

    07-31-2009

    Short but sweet. Just fine the way it is. Good rhythm, nice rhyme. I'll read yours if you read mine. Peace...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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