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  • Rocetman
  • Is awaiting an Alaskan adventure,, looking forward to it so much!

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with a bit of time to put some new thought together, the hardest part is breaking the barrier of what to write about,, and that is always from within!

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                           Writers block, brain freeze,

What do you do with any of these?

Grin and bare it, sit and stare,

Knowing inspiration comes from anywhere.

What to do? Come up with a rhyme.

You can do it anytime.

Tell a story, tell the truth.

Relay a moment of your youth.

Make up a line, give it a try,

 It’s called fiction, not a lie.

What is hard about writing your story?

Make yourself the object of glory.

Be the hero, and save the day,

Be broken hearted for someone who’s away.

Just write it down don’t think what to say,

Your true spirit will come out this way.

Writers block, brain freeze,

Your heart will work without any of these!

 

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SpiritSong commented on look inside

04-18-2010

Love it!... Love it!!... Love it!!! Only a skilled, gifted and born talent can do this kind of gleeful dance of amusement with such a simple subject...simply brilliant!! Who couldn't write a poem or prose after reading this inspiring exhortation?...please keep it coming Rocky...you R so very gifted ..TY and a 10 and fav of course..."SpiritSong"

kesavkavumthara commented on look inside

03-28-2010

A very good inspirational poem....I read it many times with keen interest.....i like it a lot!..

Bladebearer commented on look inside

10-16-2009

I know how that goes. Some days you can't kepe up with your thoughts and on others they just won't come. Very nice work!

WordSlinger commented on look inside

09-05-2009

I love it, and many times I tell ya been there, lol, thats why I guess I have 800 plus, in 21 years. This is a smart and very inspirational poem, thanks for letting me know, :)

Rocetman

09/06/2009

thanks for reading and rating,, I can always use the insperation myself.

CasimirJash commented on look inside

09-04-2009

I can relate, I have writers block all the time, mainly because I run out of things to talk about and I don't want to write about the same thing, but great insght, I do alot of what you mentioned, just write and don't think, that's how my poems turn out to be, and something totally different then what I anticipated.

Rocetman

09/05/2009

most of my writing has started as one form, and transformed to a all together different type. let your imagination run, even if it's true. you are the first comment on it.. GRACIAS.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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