Look It

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yay tomorrow I'm meating him for . . . and hopefully the sparks fly and he dumps her but if he doesn't I'm just glad he's my friend

Look It

A  lways happy to talk to me
B  elieves I'm capible of anything
C  an't see my faults though I point
D  otes on my answers
E  nterally curious about my life
F  reinds evermore
G  od-sent
H  ot and honet
I   nexsplicable attraction of both love and lust
J   oy you bring me just by saying high
K   issing me passionately pushing me to the seats
L   ove I feel for you
M  oves I'm forbiden to take
N   ever ending drama I'm jumping into
O   ff chance I prevail
P   ages and pages you fill in my journal
Q   uestions we asked back and forth for 5 days in counting
R   ed face you got getting so close to me
S   ex in the back seat of my car: best yet
T   roubles I've cause letting a girlfriend's wrath out
U   nreal connections of body, heart, and mind
V   ery conflicted feelings inside my brain
W  aiting for my opening in your life
X   anthippe of a chick she'll be if she finds us here
Y   oung love always lacking wisdom
Z   ealiously chasing you I am.

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boomboom56 commented on Look It

01-29-2012

I like the format you used, very clever. You have a good grasp of the English language.

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Look It

01-23-2012

I think this a clever poem, I lke how you used the alphabet to get your point across.

wiskeygirl5090 commented on Look It

01-23-2012

i like how you used the abc this is a very sweet poem keep up the good work :D

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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