Look Up

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    Look Up
    I don't want a broken heart,

    But then again, who does?

    It hurts so bad and feels so good.

    What's it called?

    Love.

    That bitter sweet emotion.

    As smooth as lotion,

    But as bumpy as a rock in motion.

    I approach a place with two possible roads

    This choice that I'm carrying feels like a heavy load.

    If I go the familiar way,

    I face being alone.

    If i take a chance,

    I risk being wrong.

    Getting hurt again

    Or finding true love.

    I don't know where to go so,

    I look up above.

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    cheronld commented on Look Up

    06-17-2010

    Ha Ha Ha....truly a road less traveled......a cute poem and a nice twist on...LOVE OR NOT TO LOVE......
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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