Looking into his eyes

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    Looking into his eyes

    When I look into his eyes,
    I'm taken aback in such surprise.
    To see such depth within them lies,
    I wonder if he'll hear my cries.
    Even though we have no ties,
    he should know I will tell no lies.
    But when I look into his eyes,
    I see sadness that within them cries.
    He holds this feeling so it never dies.
    But he hides this feeling cause he is wise.
    That's what I see when I look into his eyes.

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    giri commented on Looking into his eyes

    07-14-2009

    a wise poeme from a wise lady the eye is the visionary part of this lovely world. thank you for showing the sight friend.

    lenitabonita commented on Looking into his eyes

    04-29-2009

    Very good wow a lotta feeling. your talented! Can't wait to read more!

    MiserysMistress

    05/28/2009

    Thanks, I wrote this poem for a friend. Sometimes the look in his eyes just hit you in the soul and make you want to cry.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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