Look/See

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  • Devotion

    Look/See

    There is a girl opposite the room I am in.
    I LOOK at her and I SEE one girl,
    and it isn't the girl I am LOOKing at.
    She is the girl, the only girl I SEE,
    for you SEE,
    it is her that I truly SEE,
    and it is I that she truly SEEs,
    and to me everything else is just… LOOKs
    and everything else certainly can't SEE me.
    To LOOK is to notice
    but to SEE
    is to peer deep and to discover the real things that no outer shell can reveal
    and sending signals delivering awareness to how we feel.
    Almost like two hearts negotiating a deal
    with a kiss as the stamp and seal.
    With her I SEE the fine print,
    No hidden fees that can be missed by a mere LOOK
    additional charges that could have me took
    or rules that can be bent
    Her heart is open
    Wide open as a book
    that I clearly SEE
    With me she wants to be
    And with her I want to be
    And deep within each other we will forever SEE,
    While everyone else... LOOKS.

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