Loose

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    Poem Commentary

    Kinda confusing. This is really about a girl I like and just too afraid to say anything. . . so yeah. idk.

    Loose

    Around and round I fly

    Lighting on each new tree.

    This and that and there and here

    I’m never want for a place to perch.

    But the truest perch I wish for,

    The greatest thing I want,

    Is the one I’m too a-feared to find

    On the tree I will not land.

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    cmlestrade commented on Loose

    11-03-2009

    very good. the ending was very surprising and really made the poem.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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