(Lord) Why'd you drop this pain on me?

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This poem I made thinking about things that I struggle with in my life. Losing my father. Life in general.

(Lord) Why'd you drop this pain on me?

2008.

I lost my father.

I’m missin’ time

With my wife daughter

 

I know my demons

I know my kryptonite

Sometimes I clutch the bottle

When I’m alone at night

 

I struggle real hard

Each and every day

Lord Please don’t let me

Throw my life away

 

I made my share mistake

Burned a couple bridges

Poked my nose in

Thangs that wasn’t my business

 

I get it Jesus

I get it God

I think I learned my lesson

That’s why my life is hard

 

Damn near lost my brother

Barely see my friends

I’m fearin’ where I’m goin

More than where I been

 

 

Hustled once or twice

Not my destiny

I thought that Poker and Dice

Was gone be the death of me

 

I’m thinkin’ one nation

Under Big Daddy

Used to rock the lex

Used to push the caddy

 

Startin to see thangs

A lil’ different

Maybe handle life

A lil’ different

 

Try and teach my daughter

Better than I was taught

Bruhh I miss my father

Real Talk

 

It’s more important thangs

Than cars and cell phones

My Moods is up and down

Dow Jones

 

My soul is deep in debt

And I  aint talkin’ money

Now I ain’t tellin’ jokes

And nothin’ funny

 

I keep my business

On the low

I don’t smoke that sxit

I don’t smoke no dro

 

Im tryin to start a new

Destiny!

But tell me Lord

Why you drop this pain on me?

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

loanslanger’s Poems (17)

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Dear Liquor 0
"It ain't over" 0
(Lord) Why'd you drop this pain on me? 0
Life's Confessions 4
33 years (part 1) 1
Am I my brother's keeper? 1
Dear Father 2
gone again 1
Pressure 3
Until the day I was Saved 2
40 days 2
A 2nd Chance 1
Down to my last 2
I ain't the best 1
took you for granted 2
My True Life 1
Take care of your family 1