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I wrote this after I lost my dad.


Daddy, today is filled with such sorrow,
The pain from which is not borrowed.
The loss I feel runs deep,
From here I must take a blind leap.
I must believe I will see you,
From now on the world takes on a different hue.
A world filled with greys' and blues',
But we all must pay this heavy due.
You were taken from me too soon,
My sorrows, I shall sing underneath the new moon.
From now on, I shall mourn your loss,
Never again shall I be cross.
Daddy, I just want one more day,
To be your little girl, so we can play.
I need you by my side,
In who else can I confide?

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mvvenkataraman commented on Loss


A great loss indeed For the created seed The tree is gone Sorrow is born God alone is there Prayer will help bear God's laws Contain loss.



Thank you for reading my poem. And thank you for the kind words. God indeed is great in his knowlege and wisdom, and he alone knows the how and why.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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