Lost Angel

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Lost Angel

 
You left without a last word to anyone you loved.
You left me here stranded with no one to hold my hand.
You left me with nothing more than confusion in my mind,
and tears running down my cheeks.
Just writing this makes me tear up because of all the pain that caused me to let you go.

I still hold your finger,
but it's slowly slipping through my hands.
When you left, the family fell apart.
People fought,
they even refused to speak.
They stopped loving each other.
You brought out the love that was within us.
But as soon as you left,
Everyone was left with hatred in their hearts.
You may have thought we didn't care,
But you left us with so much pain in our empty hands.


You said "No worries, go to sleep."
But you didn't realize how many times
I cryed your name when you died in my dreams.

Where are you Grandma?
Because your no longer here.

I can't see you in my dreams anymore.
I can't even imagine your face.
All I see is a picture of us,
with no hatred displayed.
You held my hand in that picture,
and you sang me songs.
But it hurts me so much because I can't hear your voice at all.

I still wear a piece of your clothing,
just so I have a part of you in me.
But I can't feel the love anymore
becuase of the fact that you left me.
Now I'm left all alone,
with no one to love me
.





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MarionYost commented on Lost Angel

02-12-2010

This one brought tears to my eyes... this is amazing. A great tribute to your grandmother.. I lost my best friend in 2002, I was 15, he was 23. ( He was the only one who seemed to give a shit about me at all and I STILL can't find words worthy of describing what he meant to me. Awesome job with this. All the best -Marion-

Fallenangel87 commented on Lost Angel

02-12-2010

Wow, this is great, very heartfelt.. I can definitely feel the pain. the way you worded this is amazing. Sorry for your loss. But, pain always makes for a great poem. this is an amazing tribute. great job. -fallenangel87-

JLorian commented on Lost Angel

02-12-2010

You write passionately and with great depth of feeling. You seem to have a lot to put down on the page and I am glad you have the ability to express yourself...this should never be bottled up. Nice write. Peace. JL

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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