Lost In Insanity

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Lost In Insanity

Come and imagine, if you will
Dancing flowers on a meadow hill
Children playing in harmony
Every aspect of a perfect reality

Yet not quite real are the butterflies
And usually not seen are purple skies
Puppy dogs and kittens are here
Cuddling together without a fear

A mist is creeping over this plain
People stare at the coming change
A figure walks from the mist in black
Something strange; a face he lacks

He walks past the children crying in fear
He chuckles softly, too loud to hear
The twisted tree sings a brand new song
Filled with terror of world long gone

Demons dance as the sky clouds over
And the purple fades to a dark red thunder
Screams of terror and of true pain
Horrible laughter like that of the insane

"Do not fear." A voices says to me
"This is just a taste of your reality.
I did not make this world like this
You chose to allow the devil's kiss."

A light shines through of happiness
But all I see through this evil mist
Is the terror and pain in my world
Blood and screams from boys and girls

I begin to see the pattern then
They were killed to the tune found within
I laugh at the knowledge I had found
They say only madmen make such sounds

Years have past since the man, so dark
Came within my mind and my heart
I guess I've gotten used to the misery
Yet sometimes; I wonder if something is wrong with me

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Batitus66 commented on Lost In Insanity

12-08-2010

You are, indeeed, a true poet. The people in my small town think I have talent; and this poem reminded me how insignifigant I really am. But the simplistic nature of this poem perfects it.

1LostGypsy commented on Lost In Insanity

09-27-2010

Anger, frustration, dispare, consumed by all thats ever haunted and taunted you- this poem makes me feel less alone when my anxiety takes over....thankyou! It was a 10 in my book.

SuperChick62

11/12/2010

thank you so much for your read, I truly appreciate it.

Rhymer commented on Lost In Insanity

09-27-2010

I liked this dark poem, we have inherited the world we have created. It has always been mans choice. Excellent piece.

SuperChick62

10/27/2010

Thank you so much for the read, I hope you come back later when I've posted some of my more recent poetry.

SuSpence commented on Lost In Insanity

09-27-2010

I like the dark side of Super, and trust me, there is NOTHING wrong with you baby, Rooowr!! Haha, Love, Spence

dahlusion commented on Lost In Insanity

09-23-2010

This is superb writing and this paragraph is simply masterful: ""Do not fear." A voices says to me "This is just a taste of your reality. I did not make this world like this You chose to allow the devil's kiss."—Bravo!!

SuperChick62

09/24/2010

Thanks, Dah. It was fun writing this... :)

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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