Lost in wonder

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    Lost in wonder

                               Everyone's there for you to feel you're  not alone
                               Each little things make you aware of it's existence
                               Every sound gives you reminding of natural feeling
                               Even smallest livings're there for soul and appreance
                               
                              Fulfillment and commitment's every one desire
                              Struggle and hardship for new horizon of happiness
                               Loneliness and together for some physical formness
                               Material desire and lust named as love to be gain
                               
                             Do you know how much you're fulfill ?
                             How much you're prepared for more ?
                             What's your idea of searching some?
                             How much's necessary for your need?
                             
                             I'm lost in wonder of world with some thoughts
                              So every one may feel the same in lifetime
                              No end of innovations and inclinations
                             Reach for the right directions couldn't be found.


                               




                             

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    redbloodink commented on Lost in wonder

    12-14-2010

    The great ?'s of life......... What is it about or for...... Well it's about God...... and Him comming in the flesh as Man.... Jesus Christ was His name...... What did we think it all was in vain.... I once did I thought life was about me.... I supose I was wrong...... red
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    jyothi

    12/15/2010

    TY for comment.

    gogant commented on Lost in wonder

    12-12-2010

    A lot of questions go unanswered, but we keep wondering, and asking.......hey, we might not get the right answer, but, what does it hurt to inquire..............Lovely verse, JY........................gogant
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    jyothi

    12/13/2010

    TY for comment.

    kdarcy commented on Lost in wonder

    10-23-2010

    Without questions, we do not live to find answers. Love the concept and the title, nicely done, be well k
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    jyothi

    10/23/2010

    TY for awesome comment.

    Olan01 commented on Lost in wonder

    10-16-2010

    A good poem, which asks questions of ourselves and life. Well done. Love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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    jyothi

    10/23/2010

    TY for thoughtful and inner touched comment.

    lunamarie commented on Lost in wonder

    10-15-2010

    ohhh sh** ...... these questions are making me nervous ... haha! ..................
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    jyothi

    10/23/2010

    NO need to be nervous,sometime we should ask these questions.Thanks for comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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