lost love

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    lost love

    1 day i fell in love wit the guy i
    thought i new but 1 day he left me 4 some
    1 new he tryed 2 play me like a foul
    he said he loved me but it wasnt true

    wasnt true if only he new how much it
    it hurts 2 see him with some 1 new
    i wish i could tell him i love him 1 more time
    i wish he new how much it hurts i
    guess i will have 2 move on and see some 1
    new this is why i hate love the pain that it begins
    you always have 2 renew thats why love sticks
    cause men come and go i have
    set him free and see some 1 new
    so skip the dum ass

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    dahlusion commented on lost love

    11-17-2009

    A good poem written with so much passion and creativity…!

    vancelemley commented on lost love

    09-15-2009

    Can relate on so many levels...he'll realize what he lost....

    freind commented on lost love

    07-13-2009

    this is very good piece.that is what someone did to me. very goood write .they will alll figure it out in the long run good job

    mistervee commented on lost love

    06-30-2009

    Nice poem. Lot's of feeling. Don't hate the game (love) hate the player. Put your emotions into your poetry till He comes along.

    wildpendigus commented on lost love

    06-15-2009

    It's a very good poem I think it would be a very romantic passionate song a very slow love ballad produced right, along with good melodies, It could be a possible hit, from standpoint since I am in music! you can also comment on my poems also grecowong@yahoo.com

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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