LOST SOULS

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  • 1990lh
  • 2023 anyone... I randomly just thought about this place.πŸ₯°πŸ€—

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HI ALL HOPE THIS DONT OFFEND ANYONE THESE ARE JUST MY THOUGHT ON PAPER SO DONT TAKE THIS PERSONNALLY HOPE Y'ALL LIKE IT.;0)

LOST SOULS

 

 

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 I’m angry

I don’t give a damn about you or your family

You see

I’ve finally accepted my reality

I know peace, happiness, and prosperity

Is prohibited from me

I finally understand that a sorrowful filled life,

And then death is my destiny

I have nothing

I am nothing

Therefore, no rules or laws apply to me

I can steal, kill, lie, and fornicate freely

Because your oh mighty God don’t scare me

My power is absolute

I am dominated

And the world is submissive

I loathe the thought of tranquility

I embrace the thought of destruction

I seize every opportunity

To cause mass corruption, and pain

People are just pieces to my vindictive games

I’m a social monstrosity

I’m the one that will rape women

Why? Because they were put here to pleasure me

I’m the one that will kidnap and kill your children

Why? Because they annoyed me

I’m the one that will rob you

Why? Because all worldly possessions belong to me

I’m the one that will break into your houses,

And slaughter you families

Why? To see them bleed amuses me

I am the soul without purpose

I am the soul with a horrific mentality

I am the soul with obstructed faith

I am the lost soul

I am your mother, your father

I am your sister, brother

I am your children, nieces, and nephews

Cousins and friends

And maybe

Maybe

I’M YOU….

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edgee commented on LOST SOULS

05-13-2013

hey there...long time but i am around again, just checked out your poem and very deep....keeps you guessing until the end and makes you think...we all see a lil bit of ourselves there...keep the talent flowing, looking forward to more from you

Moveme commented on LOST SOULS

03-01-2012

Very exciting! I was wondering who could that person be, almost had want to skip to the end but i'm glad i kept to the end.

boomboom56 commented on LOST SOULS

01-29-2012

Crazy stuff. The words used are great and makes a person go "WOW". And the end was unexpected to say the lest.

carynontherhine commented on LOST SOULS

10-14-2010

Wow 19, that was a really thrilling write! I am speechless, really. Yes you are so insightful, it can be anyone. I got such a thrill at the ending and thank you for that rush to feel alive. Hugz

Crush commented on LOST SOULS

10-10-2010

thanks for holding up that mirror. it's never out of style to be honest an have people check in with their soul.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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