Lost

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    Poem Commentary

    Take what you will from this poem. I don't have anything personal regarding it, It was written off of observations of the world around me.

    Lost

    Your eyes so cold, your heart so numb

    I know what you are

    A monster, a tyrant, I'm so dumb

    to think this could go far.

     

    Your face is pale, you never speak

    I can't say a word

    Never again, you'll think I'm weak

    But you'll never again be heard.

     

    I'm not dumb, I'm not smart

    I am simply sick.

    I look at you, rip you apart

    Am I finally psychotic

     

    I had to do, what I had to do

    I couldn't leave you here

    I took the knife, I got rid of you

    and thus I end my fear

     

    I lay your body, ever so still

    I drop it into a hole

    This I know, you'll never feel

    I watch you as you roll.

     

    I am weak, and yet I'm not

    I hope I pay the cost

    For this crime, I hope I rot

    Assuming I don't get lost

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    poetsara113 commented on Lost

    10-02-2009

    very dark indeed well written ooooooooooscary.....................
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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