Lost

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Lost

I open my eyes to morning mist
  reality swirls around in heavy fog
unable to tell from where I've come
  fearful of any direction I may take

Soon sunk into a bog of indecision
  the quagmire of uselesness sucks down
pulling and sucking until all is paralyzed
  the urge to just go under overpowers

Alone in the dark night of the soul
  any cry for help is strangled by
fear of appearing weak, unbalanced, unable to
  carry one's own load in life

Out from the mist, from the other side,
  a friendly voice encourages trying some more
as a breath of fresh wind blows,  the fog clears, bog dries
  and the way I came and the way forward
all makes sense now.

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bluskyinthenite commented on Lost

04-12-2010

Some pople paths are harder than others. Your path my not be straight and narrow but you put all you have into.... Just what you got. a trooper!!!.... Weatherstone " Rocks!"

Weatherstone

04/12/2010

That's so sweet. Thanks so much!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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