LOST

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    • EG3RED
    • HAVE NOT BEEN HERE IN A WHILE BUT I AM BACK AND I SHALL HAVE NEW POEMS UP SOON!

    LOST

    ONE EARLY MORNING I WAKE UP BRAIN STORMING.

    IN RETROSPECT THINGS WHERE SO GREAT.

    NOW ALL I CAN THINK IS HOW DO I FIX THIS MESS.

    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE IS NO LONGER MY LOVE.

    AND WITH HER NEGLECT I FALL DEEPER IN THOUGHTS.

    ALL I WANT IS FOR THINGS TO BE NORMAL.

    BUT HOW CAN THAT BE IF MY THINKING IS NOT NORMAL.

    UNUSUAL THOUGHTS LINGER MY HEAD.

    AND ONCE AGAIN I REMAIN IN SUSPENSE.

    MY FUTURE IS LOST AND MY HEART IS TORN.

    THIS IS JUST ONE CRAZY STORM.

    HOPE IT PASSES BY WITHOUT FURTHER DUE.

    CAUSE IF IT DON'T I WONT KNOW WHAT TO DO.

    NIGHT AND DAYS JUST SEEM SO DULL.

    COLOR HAS LOST IT'S TASTE AND I FEEL ALL ALONE.

    RIDING THIS STORM OUT WITH JUST THE HOPE.

    THAT THINGS WILL GET BACK TO WHERE IS JUST ALL LOVE.

    THINGS WHERE GREAT, THINGS WHERE GOOD.

    NOW I SIT HERE NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO.

    DAYS HAVE PASSED AND STILL I CRY.

    I'VE SHED SO MUCH TEARS I JUST RAN DRY.

    MY LOVE PLEASE COME BACK AND DON'T BE LATE.

    CAUSE I WONT CONTINUE LIVING LIFE TILL THAT DAY.

     

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    Sydney commented on LOST

    02-21-2010

    this is very sorrowful. i like the flow. i can understand where youre coming from. your poem shows your emotions that youve weaved into this. - Sydney

    KING commented on LOST

    02-18-2010

    Ouch! Yeah.. ungh, pretty deep man. No words i say will heal what pain you may be suffering I do hope that it works out for you in a way that you can again find love and joy within you.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    EG3RED’s Poems (11)

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    Title Comments
    A BEAUTIFUL NEW BEGINNING WITH YOU! 1
    WHY YOU'RE SO SPECIAL 1
    LOST 2
    THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE 3
    LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATIO
    N OF IT!
    1
    LOVE IS FOR FOOLS AND I AIN'T NO FOOL! 3
    I LOVE THE FACT. 4
    JUST SOMETHING I HAD TO GET OUT. 3
    THE FUNNY THING ABOUT LOVE 3
    I TOLD YOU I LOVE YOU 1
    THE FORCE OF LOVE BEHOLDS THE TRUTH 6