Lost

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Lost

Into the night

I took flight

Sailing through

Darkness an Light

Lonely road I stormed

Riding the lightning

With a screaming

Beam of night

Hot on the trail

Of what I do not no

Contantly moving into

Day and night

Its close

To close

I'm screaming

In the Night

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dahlusion commented on Lost

04-05-2010

Oh, the Gothic darkness is simply beautiful and poetically delivered. You write with such passion and determination. Bravo!!

bluskyinthenite

05/05/2010

Dahlusion......... thank you very much for checking my work out. very much appreciated. thanks

knight4696 commented on Lost

04-02-2010

I have to say Blue ... I like your style! You can certainly convey a lot in such a few words! You pen both light and dark in your works with such clarity Great job my friend! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

04/04/2010

Thank you so much Ken.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

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Enthusiasm Fading 4
Sorry is a empty word 6
Invisible 5
Break 2
Take Flight 4
Searching for my mojo 1
Nature 8
Imagine 2
Nodin's blowing 2
Sons Poem 3
Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
Nebie know more 4
"this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
Evolution Distruction 3
Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
Crying a River of Pain 5
Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
Lazy cold cold day and here ai " Sitting here looking like this!" 1
Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain" 2
Jalapeno Sub 3
No regrets 4
Stair master 1
Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2