Lost

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    Lost

    a mother walks down a side walk,
    in the daarkness of her shadows
    dwelling in the thoughts
    of what happened earlier that day
    no longer will she see her child smile,
    nor will she hear him cry
    no longer will she bathe him,
     or sing him a lullaby
    her child is now a memory
    of something she once had
    now she lingers in thought of hopelessness,
     what will she tell his dad
    off to work this morning,
    his last words to him were i love you
    though he never would have guessed
    he would just be coming home to you
    tears dwell in her eyes
    as the images replay in her mind
    of watching her child chase after his ball
    tires screeched, a horn blared
    but the car had stopped to late
    her innocent child
    had met an untimely fate
    she ran over to him
    thinking there was still time
    but when she reached the pavement
    a shoe was all she could find
    the sounds around her dimmed
    sirens and lights entered the scene
    there was nothing they could do
    for the child was already gone
    so now as this mother walks
    she sings a sad song
    no longer will she see her child
    nor will she hear him cry
    no longer will she bathe him
    nor sing him a lullaby


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    wamomo commented on Lost

    12-19-2009

    tragic....this nearly had me in tears...this is a hard one to read because you get an idea early on of the direction it is going...and it just makes your heart shiver with horror, but your emotions are pulled and you have to keep going...like you're gently holding her up as she walks...just beacuae it's all you could do.. it is an excellent write!!

    redbloodink commented on Lost

    12-19-2009

    wow Bang powerful write... Our fate is what God wants.... We will never understand this... I believe we grow in this.... I hope all your days are blessed you and your family... God can give more then any-one else including ourselves could ever take... Just trust God and in His holy name Jesus Christ I remain solid... even tho I change... Sure is nice to know He don't....

    laydbak1 commented on Lost

    06-20-2009

    Breathless, at the horror of this tragedy... I cannot begin to imagine the crushing feeling of the loss of an innocent child's life like this... You touch the core pains everyone feels with this....

    cliftondurant commented on Lost

    06-20-2009

    I can feel the deep emotion of this poem it is so sad and reality to a lot of peoplea great job

    Richisfun commented on Lost

    06-20-2009

    Oh i remember when i was young a child got hit by the car, this is reality and so sad, good work--rich

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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