Loudest Silence

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    Loudest Silence

    Loudest Silence

    We started out in friendship

    Sharing with our words

    Telling each other of our painful past

    And of the future and dreams to come

     

    But I guess I read things wrong

    And shared to much for him

    For now he falls to silence

    And I’m left hanging in the wind

     

    I won’t lie and say it don’t hurt

    But the worst part of all

    Is that I simply miss talking to him

    Only now he hides behind his wall

     

    We all have dealt with things in life

    Loss of a loved one, illness, and heart ache

    But we have to deal and let go

     

    If we don’t we get stuck

    To scared to live again

    Unwilling to move, unable to grow

     

    I can’t do anything but be who I am

    I shouldn’t have to prove I could love you best

    If it were meant to be you would feel it

    I guess this was just another test.

    Bree 8/20/2012

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    Iliketoflyaway commented on Loudest Silence

    08-22-2012

    The last paragraph is the truth.you expose to much you don't know how people are going to take you. great read bree!
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    EyesOfRain commented on Loudest Silence

    08-20-2012

    Is there anyone that can't relate to this? You expressed your meaning so well! Great job.
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    BreeLove

    08/21/2012

    Thank You for taking the time to read and comment i write from what i deal with and go through in life makes it easy for people to relate. Bree

    Kingwebstar commented on Loudest Silence

    08-20-2012

    So true life is like that sometimes when you ever get a chance check out my work too.Writing is the therapy that poets need.
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    Kingwebstar commented on Loudest Silence

    08-20-2012

    Beautiful and truthful write .You always write from the heart that is why I love to read your work. Love Da KinG
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    BreeLove

    08/20/2012

    Thank You very much, I have been venting alot lately, so some of my stuff is a little down, but i cant hold on to it, it will eat me up, so i write. but i look forward to brighter days and sharing a more positive flow. Bree

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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