LOVE A PSEUDO CONSCIENCE

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Love a fact sometimes, most of the times fallacy and either it uses the loved one as prey or is itself used as scapegoat. There is no perfect love in the world like there is no perfect man on the earth. Then how could be there a perfect and pure love. it is much concerned here to express the beauty of love so that the so called lovers value the love and not to pretend and deceive in its name.

LOVE A PSEUDO CONSCIENCE

Love a pseudo conscience

 

Life, light of love

Love, might of life

One heart, the blue of love

Other, a green of passion

Together is the Nature

Romance, just impulsive

Sex, trifling

But of course, thrilling

Love - not simple

To pop up at first sight;

May be, true or false!

Only conscience knows-

Conscience, just unknown

Hormones deceive

Humans surrender!

Love, a channel to pinnacle

But difficult, to chronicle!

All the emotions and egos

To be proscribed to thrive;

Love, a usually unusual

Like the world feels that it is;

Love, incredibly a silent sound

As The core of earth, so hot

And as the surface of the moon

So cold and pleasant and agreeable;

It shelters the sphere

Like a soil and air

Like a water and fire

Like a love and lust

And like breath and dust;

Harmoniously complete

And exclusively inclusive;

Like the song of the bird with

Only sense, no words;

 Like the soul without structure

And with invisible wings

Flying to the destiny

Ignoring the inertia of minds

Kicking the obstacle in to goals;

Love always, a win-win game…

And there is naught to shame!

 

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sanctus commented on LOVE A PSEUDO CONSCIENCE

02-21-2011

I love the originality and observations of your writing. Excellent!!

RKCHOWDARY11

02/22/2011

Hi Dear sanctus Thank you for your compliment.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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